English should be our official language or not? What's your opinion about this.
Nowadays, English is a global language all over the world. Nevertheless, Vietnam as well as many countries does not make chances for people to use English. In my opinion, I suggest that the government should let English be our official language for several reasons.
To begin with, if the government put it into action, English will be used in communication. People have to talk English everyday with other people. All the signs, movies… are used in English. The more we speak it, the more natural and efficient our English can be. For example, English is one of four official languages in Singapore (besides Malay, Chinese, and Tamil). That’s why Singaporean takes it important to use English. It changes the attitude of people when it becomes our official language. It’s compulsory, not optional.
Moreover, English will be used popularly in many fields such as business, culture… especially in education. If English become our official language, the government must support more money on helping students to conquer English skills. In addition, outside the school system, parents are paying a lot of money to help their children learn English at home or abroad. English is used widely in our country can create a good foundation for our society to develop.
In conclusion, English should be used as our official language besides Vietnamese. This will bring us a lot of opportunities as well as challenges. If the Government takes it serious, the number of Vietnamese population use English efficiently will increase dramatically for sure.
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