The internet is becoming more and more control to our lives, as it provides more and more information, acts as a means of voting, etc.. these functions have obvious benefits, but there are dangers involved in the control the internet’s exerting over our lives.
- What benefits are involved?
- What dangers are involved?
- How far do you agree and disagree with the opinion expressed?
Internet has become an integral part of people’s daily life. Many regard it as a generous information provider, whereas for others it acts as a culprit to damage our society gradually. My essay will examine its aspects for both of sides.
To begin with, it is irrefutable that the innovation of internet opens a new horizon for people to discover the whole world. Admittedly, while staying at home and just holding a laptop on hand, internet will guide you easily accessed to many places around over the world with extraordinary sceneries and amazing spots. For example, in a research in African ...
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Sentence: Even for some, internet surfing becomes their habits, without parent's caring, they stays hours on the internet for gossiping, playing online games, which lead to their lack of physical exercises.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to they and stays
In the other hand,
Suggestion: On the other hand,
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