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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?


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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

There is no doubt that, sometimes, punishment rarely means that novel criminal will stop crime. There are various anti-social and unprofessionalism reasons behind this. In this essay, I will contend these reasons more thoroughly and unveil suggestions to at least lower this issue.

The foremost cause is bad company that increases the chances of further crime. When after first crime, a criminal go to jail, he meets to his inmates. This is very obvious that bunch of bad people cannot give unbiased direction to their new comer. For instance, in India, Prasad Kong, who unintentionally hit a woman, went to jail where he met to other criminals. When he set free, he kidnapped son of rich m ...

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Sentence: In this essay, I will contend these reasons more thoroughly and unveil suggestions to at least lower this issue.
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Sentence: When after first crime, a criminal go to jail, he meets to his inmates.
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