Many shops work for 24 hours a day 7 days a week; some people see it as a good idea, while others don’t. Compare different views of customers, shop workers and the whole society of this subject and give your opinion about it.
Nowadays, shops work for twenty four hours and seven days a week to get more profit. Some people think that is a good notion and others discord with it. In this essay, I will explore the statement based on customers, shop workers and whole society.
According to customers view, it is immense advantage for customers if shop opens for twenty four hours a week. In emergency, they can buy medicines at the midnight. For example, recently my cousin infected with wheezing problem and he struggle for breathing at night and prescribed medicine is over at home. On that time his father went to medical shop and buy medicines for him. It is an enormous advantage in emergency period.
On the other hand, according to shop workers view, it is a great disadvantage for shop workers if they work for more hours that result in stress and anxiety. Moreover there will not be much customers result in more use of man power electricity and it lead to loss of the company. For example, my neighbor shop works all twenty four hours due to greediness and there is no profit at night time result in close of shop due to insufficient fund.
In addition, based on whole society it is useless to open shops at midnight there will be less or no customers for the shopkeeper. People will sleep at night so no one comes for shopping. In a nutshell, by comparing customers, shop workers and whole society view it is unnecessary to open a shop at night it will be a significant loss to the shop keeper. Only at emergency time need a shop but if people should buy their items in advance at the day time itself which result in wealthy and prosperous world.
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Sentence: For example, recently my cousin infected with wheezing problem and he struggle for breathing at night and prescribed medicine is over at home.
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Sentence: For example, recently my cousin infected with wheezing problem and he struggle for breathing at night and prescribed medicine is over at home.
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Is the following sentence
Is the following sentence correct.
For example, recently my cousin infected with asthma disease and he struggled for breathing at night and prescribed medicine is over at home.
Moreover there will not be much customers result in more use of man power electricity and it led to loss of the company.
Hai.. Dev... Here is my
Hai.. Dev...
Here is my suggeston for you
wheezing..:suggestion?
...my cousin is suffered with asthmatic problem...
Tessy
Hai...Dev...
Good essay, nice to read..
Put some disadvantages from customer view..
The last part of last sentance in the conclusion, little confusion, check it out..
over all good attempt ...
Keep on concentration..
Tessy.