People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they ern and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you aagree or disagree?

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People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they ern and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you aagree or disagree?

It is true that many people should avoid to pay tax, so that they can save all money they earn. In my opinion, this is absolutely right people can decide to pay tax or not to state. There are several causes of this opinion.

Firstly, tax is very needed to build public facilities, such as bus shelter, post office, train station, school building, hospital etc. Secondly, the tax is used to pay civil servant’s salary. As people know, there are many public services that employ people as civil servant.

On the other hand, I believe that income tax is not the best way to supplement annual stage wage. Firstly, natural resources in country are good enough to earn state income, such as exporting coal, gasoline, salt, gold etc. It is important to remember that state has full control in processing natural resources. This means state has no competitors in processing natural resources. So, why do people still have to pay tax if there are many natural resources can be turned into good product- as energy resources, as transportation engine, electronic tools, etc?. Secondly, in tax department, corruption is still be a big problem. This is caused by poorness of surveillance in using tax income. This case can reduces much tax income and also makes a wrong distribution tax income from state to corruptors.

In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for supporting tax payment and refusing tax payment to the state. But, I believe that natural resources are enough to suplemet annual wage state, moreover in developing economics of the state. There are many things that have to be prepared an application of tax rules especially in surveillance. Hence, tax can be the best solution in supporting state development.

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Sentence: But, I believe that natural resources are enough to suplemet annual wage state, moreover in developing economics of the state.
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