In some countries students who misbehave have to leave the school and are not allowed to continue their education. In other countries they can return to their studies after a suspension period. Discuss both options and give your opinion
It is a very important issue in every country that the citizens must abide to the laws. This attribute of following the rules need to be cultivated in one's behaviour since young age. We know that children need to learn discipline so that they will be able to live well amongst the society and they are thought this through the time that they spend at school, outside their family. Therefore it is very important that schools must be strict with their rules and regulations, followed by the consequences that students will receive from disobeying them.
Some schools take it very seriously that the...
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Sentence: The first category of punishment is reasonable to be carried out if the school really emphasizes on building good characters in their graduans and they want to keep the school's environment in good order for the students to feel safe.
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