The level of freedom that tourists must be entitled to when visiting a foreign country has always been a matter of controversy. There are many ideas regarding restricting visitors freedom, some for and some against it.
On the one hand, advocates of this idea believe that allowing travelers to enjoy their freedom has many undeniable merits. One such advantage is that those paying a visit to the country will not be annoyed or disturbed by local laws they do not understand and, as a result, they will not be overwhelmed since many of the visitors, with completely different social and cultural b...
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