Although, work is an essential element for sustenance, people should be enthusiastic about their hobbies and leisure apart from their jobs. In my opinion, both are equally important and should not trample the other one. A fine work life balance is an essential ingredient for an overall success.
For instance, people who regard work as a priority lose a major part of their life in office. We as human beings have once in a life time opportunity to enjoy the beauty of this world. Nowadays, there are so many activities to perform, that every individual has a variety of choices for them to choos...
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Sentence: Additionally, hobbies brings out a lot of creativity within the individual.
Description: The fragment hobbies brings out is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace brings with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
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Sentence Length SD: 3.45 7.5
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 394 350
No. of Characters: 1791 1500
No. of Different Words: 209 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.455 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.546 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.567 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.45 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.29 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.503 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5