You are hereSome people say that some urgent problems in modern society can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Some people say that some urgent problems in modern society can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Problem faced today by the modern society are to such an extent that they need cooperation at local as well as international level. This requires individual awareness as well as global cooperation. But some of the problems require international attention at a large scale such as Pollution, Crime and problem face to the modern world economy.
Nevertheless, these are international issues but most of them can only be solved at local level. These problems require local educating individuals so that they can understand their social responsibilities. When we say at individual level we mean by that it requires each individual to play a positive role i.e. if we talk about pollution we need to create awareness at individual level to better deal with the problem.
Some of the problem faced to the humanity really requires international cooperation such as war on terror, these days more and more countries are joining their hands to effectively deal with this single issue. We definitely need international cooperation on to make this beautiful world a safer place to live.
Furthermore, international collaboration plays a vital role to combat the economic and financial crisis. For instance problems like poverty and hunger are the most challenging problems faced to humankind in the modern world. No individual country can deal with this issue on its own. We definitely require global cooperation on this matter.
In conclusion, depending on the nature of the problem we require individual awareness as well as international assistance. We can say that world has become a global village where we should be thinking beyond the regional boundaries to effectively deal with modern world problems.
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Sentence: Problem faced today by the modern society are to such an extent that they need cooperation at local as well as international level.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
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350 words will be ideal.
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