Some people think parents should teach children how to be a good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to team this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the past, numerous people believed that parents should teach teenager how to be best nominee of society because they had many experiences that they could share with their children. Nowadays, parents teach infant, and school have many responsibilities because some parents are busy for their work. Thus, the statement is rather dubious.
Parents have responsibility to teach children who have a good candidate of society because they are only one who is near and cares with them. They share experience which they had when they were young. They explain their experience when they were still in un...
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