Students should pay the full cost of university studies,rather than have free higher education provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
We are living in competant era where the meaning of good education is extreemly high which plays a magnificant role in our life so there are ample number of those people who should pay full amount of their university studies instead of taking help from government. But I would probably oppose to this idea.
There are multifarious points who support my view. First and foremost, majority of people are not able to pay their amount of fee because the studies of universities are too much expensive,the people who belong to down trodden families are not affulent enough to the expenditure of university study including fee, accomodation rent, examination payment and so on hence, government should pay for them. Moreover, education has been back bone of every materialistic as well as modern society ,is quite expensive in this beautiful planet, I, therefore, consider that it could be a better solution to impart higher education on the behalf of students.
Furthermore,if government should pay for inherited gifted people who are not only earn money for their own but also lucrative for government like it makes huge investment. For instance, there are various profesionalists such a s doctors, engineers, scientists, have recieved financial aid from government, later discovered diverse inventions which is proving fruitful for whole nation. Adding to it, it's a motivation factor, best in terms of leisure travelling and hobbies.
By contrast,on the flip side, the government has another many concerns like schools, hospitals, organisations and many more thus it should pay attention on them. What is more, if students should pay full fee by their own, knoww their responsibility that how to manage things and maintain equal balance. In addition, there is a deprivation of intention of studies if government should pay on behalf of them.
To recapitulate, it goes without saying that "Today's students are leaders of tomorrow". Thence it is justifiable that government smust pay for inherited gifted students those are not mature enough to pay the fees, not for all.
Sentence: For instance, there are various profesionalists such a s doctors, engineers, scientists, have recieved financial aid from government, later discovered diverse inventions which is proving fruitful for whole nation.
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Sentence: We are living in competant era where the meaning of good education is extreemly high which plays a magnificant role in our life so there are ample number of those people who should pay full amount of their university studies instead of taking help from government.
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Sentence: First and foremost, majority of people are not able to pay their amount of fee because the studies of universities are too much expensive,the people who belong to down trodden families are not affulent enough to the expenditure of university study including fee, accomodation rent, examination payment and so on hence, government should pay for them.
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Sentence: For instance, there are various profesionalists such a s doctors, engineers, scientists, have recieved financial aid from government, later discovered diverse inventions which is proving fruitful for whole nation.
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Sentence: What is more, if students should pay full fee by their own, knoww their responsibility that how to manage things and maintain equal balance.
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Sentence: Thence it is justifiable that government smust pay for inherited gifted students those are not mature enough to pay the fees, not for all.
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