You are heretask.The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

task.The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan


drsaminayasmin's picture

By drsaminayasmin - Posted on 22 May 2013

Essay topic: 

task.

The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

these two pie charts taken from a survey showing trend changes for leisure activities in America in 1999 and 2009. It is obvvious from these are carts that walking was most appreciated in both era while jogging was getting less popularity.

in 1999 walking was most populer accounting for 29 % followed by soccer which was17 %.aerobic and cycling were almost equally populer i.e 13% and 12% respectively. yoga was least practiced activity which was 5%. jogging, swimming and camping were almost same category for their use. (7, 8 and 9 %).

on the other hand after 10 years swimming was doubled for its popularity. walking was still liked the most accounting for 31%. a big change noted was that no one was using yoga anymore rater weightlifting made its space instead ,10%. there was a significant decline in popularity of jogging ,aerobics and bicycling 3,4 and 7 % respectively. a small increased trend was seen in camping and soccer in 10 years period.

in conclusion for good health these leisure activities are crucial .walking is always comfortable and inexpensive actvity.

Average: 6 (3 votes)
Tags
More essays by this user:
Looking for speaking partner/tutor/chat? Join the instant conversation now!
    
Something about you
Choose a nickname and enter at least one ID (Skype, MSN, QQ, ICQ or Yahoo) if you want to be listed!
Registered users only
Loading...
(144 users watching; 1 users on the list)
People online
Nickname Sex L Country Favorite topics Contact

The chart below shows the average hours worked per day by married men and women in paid employment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant . Shahasib
Task 1 Madhuka
Sports help to a greater extent to build peace in world. Do you agree or disagree? Give some examples and include relevant experiences in your response. sharmin_islam sticky icon
The private motor vehicle has greatly improved individual freedom of movement.Moreover, it has become a status symbol.Its use, though it has impacted negatively on city centres as a whole.What are some serious problem brought about by private motor vehicl Priyap
some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind such as reading or doing puzzles.Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.discuss both the views and give your opinion. suzain
When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. HANOPA SELPIANA
Most of big cities are overpopulated. Why do people still move to big cities? Give your opinion and example. sandy123
Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishm MisterWandering sticky icon
People are living longer than ever before. At the same time the young population is declining while the number of old people is rising. Will this development be a benefit for the society? What are the advantages and disadvantages of having more old people Rahi
IELTS essay: the advantages and disadvantages of pocket money essayking

Term
Write complaint letter to the airline manager regarding the behavior of one of staff members on your flight. In your letter- Give full details of your flight.- Say what the problem with the staff member was.- What would you like the manager to do regardin marzieh IELTS
GENERAL TRAINING WRITING TASK 1You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter-Explain why you want to take time off work-Give details of the amount sliwer IELTS
The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, fromfour different sectors between 1990 and 2007 RamdhanHidayat IELTS
Argumentative Essay: Advantages and Disadvantages of Using the Internet alfitrah8.5 IELTS
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car. marzieh IELTS
The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant. Kal-El IELTS Writing Task I
The tables below show people's reasons for giving up smoking and when they intend to give up.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant andaihiep IELTS
Writing task I (General)You were hurt in a minus accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter :* Say who you are.* Give details about the accident.* Suggest how TEST-English School IELTS
When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? waleed1 IELTS Writing Task II
There is a growing demand for freshwater nowadays and this is becoming aglobal problem. Discuss the possiblecauses for it. What measures can betaken by governments and individuals toovercome this problems? Justin sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II

Term
Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures can governments and individuals take to respo prathapreddy sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
People naturally resist making changes in their lives.What kind of problems can this cause? What solution can you suggest? Ramin mm IELTS Writing Task II
The charts show the reasons for employees to take up part-time studying while workingand how the part-time study programs arefunded.You should write at least 150 words. Suraj IELTS Writing Task I
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? hariakia IELTS Writing Task II
Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? TuralHazrat IELTS Writing Task II
Write a letter to the publisher in a newspaper, asking to advertise a meeting of people from different countries you are organizing. Explain where, when and why. prathapreddy IELTS Writing Task I
Part-time employment – application letterYou are looking for part-time employment.Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter•introduce yourself•explain what type of work you are looking for•say what experience and skills you have carl IELTS Writing Task I
Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Alciozzo sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Alciozzo sticky icon IELTS Writing Task I
Should Parents encourage their Children to play outdoor sports instead of Computer games? Do you agree or Disagree? ptpielts sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II

Your company sent you on a training in another country , in the end of the training you get a certificate , you’ve lost it .Write letter to the responsible tell him/her:- How you lost your certificate.- Why you need the certificate now.- What you need him prathapreddy sticky icon IELTS Writing Task I
Last weekend you were at your friends house and you forgot your watch somewhere at their house.Write a letter to thank himTell him that you forgot your watch at his house.write other things you want to tell him ptpielts sticky icon IELTS Writing Task I
Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue? Justin sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures can governments and individuals take to respo prathapreddy sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win the match or to break world records. These days, they are more likely to be motivated by the prize money and the opportunity to be famous.What message does this send to yo mcristinabianca sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Alciozzo sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Alciozzo sticky icon IELTS Writing Task I
There is a growing demand for freshwater nowadays and this is becoming aglobal problem. Discuss the possiblecauses for it. What measures can betaken by governments and individuals toovercome this problems? Justin sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
Should Parents encourage their Children to play outdoor sports instead of Computer games? Do you agree or Disagree? ptpielts sticky icon IELTS Writing Task II
Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree? hariakia IELTS Writing Task II
essayE-rater's picture

Sentence: It is obvvious from these are carts that walking was most appreciated in both era while jogging was getting less popularity.
Error: obvvious Suggestion: obvious

Sentence: in 1999 walking was most populer accounting for 29 followed by soccer which was17 .aerobic and cycling were almost equally populer i.e 13 and 12 respectively. yoga was least practiced activity which was 5. jogging, swimming and camping were almost same category for their use.
Error: populer Suggestion: popular

Sentence: in conclusion for good health these leisure activities are crucial .walking is always comfortable and inexpensive actvity.
Error: actvity Suggestion: activity

flaws:
Put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.

Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 6 10
No. of Words: 179 200
No. of Characters: 867 1000
No. of Different Words: 111 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.658 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.844 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.672 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.222 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.423 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.777 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.046 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4