Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there are lots of advertisement around the people which can influence on their selection when they want to buy. Moreover, many of television commercials are shown during the day and these programs can provide the golden opportunity for the people to have vast selection of different kinds of good.
It is clear that advertisements can provide a competition situation for companies to produce goods with high quality which is lead to encouraging people to buy these goods and increase the customer satisfactory which would not had happened if the advertisement programs were not in the social media. Therefore, it is obvious that advertisement programs that are broadcast on social media like radio or television not only encourage people to purchase somethings that they really do not need but they also increase the competition circumstance among companies who produce the same goods.
On the other hand, there are some aspects that can not be over looked in the society as regards of the sales of popular consumer goods. It can be seen that when have not purchasing power they can not buy some things even if these goods are advertised by several companies through vast advertisement programs. These days, people are aware about some advertisements that are not in truthful way and they deceive the people and the goods not only have not decent quality but they also have not certain guarantee.
In conclusion, I think although advertising have important activity role in the sales of popular consumer goods, today, the people who have special budget in their life for some emergency goods and they try to prioritize their needs and list them which is why they do not pay more attention to advertising.
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prioritize is a verb and after that try to i think we must use the verb!
yes, you are right. Sorry for
yes, you are right. Sorry for the mistake!
Sentence: It is clear that advertisements can provide a competition situation for companies to produce goods with high quality which is lead to encouraging people to buy these goods and increase the customer satisfactory which would not had happened if the advertisement programs were not in the social media.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to customer and satisfactory
Sentence: In conclusion, I think although advertising have important activity role in the sales of popular consumer goods, today, the people who have special budget in their life for some emergency goods and they try to prioritize their needs and list them which is why they do not pay more attention to advertising.
Description: A verb, present participle or gerund is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to advertising and have
Sentence: Therefore, it is obvious that advertisement programs that are broadcast on social media like radio or television not only encourage people to purchase somethings that they really do not need but they also increase the competition circumstance among companies who produce the same goods.
Error: somethings Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In conclusion, I think although advertising have important activity role in the sales of popular consumer goods, today, the people who have special budget in their life for some emergency goods and they try to prioritize their needs and list them which is why they do not pay more attention to advertising.
Error: prioritize Suggestion: priorities
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