To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures do you think can protect them?
Role of media in the globalization era is very strategic. Through billboards people could get some information's about some products, singularly related to daily needs and it is generally believed that some societies are affected by advertisements as well.
At first, along with the rhythm of life, existence of technology nowadays more incline day by day, take television as one example. Television is one of media to show some commodities for bulwarks. Inhabitants always watching television everyday, at the same time advertising industries more and more increase year by year. This means, ther...
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Sentence: Television is one of media to shows some commodities for bulwarks.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to to and shows
Sentence: This means, there is benefit for advertising enterprises to influenced human's thought through television.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and influenced
Sentence: It takes wise and objective thought, in the event of buy some commodities.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to of and buy
Sentence: In spite of, it is useful to creates healthy economy, and to avoids imperfect business competition, either in a regional area or in an international domain.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to to and creates
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to to and avoids
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