When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
Each and every country wants to be developed their technologies to enhance proficiency skills to reduce work lab our load. So I opted I disagree with above statement.
First of all, in 21 century this is known as innovation of technologies, scientific development, thoughts of people working changed, human minds work less than machine. For instance most of people use emails rather than posting their letters, documents sends with in one day, travelling become easier.
Secondly traditional skills enlarge to success towards modern technology. All technology is not good. For instances weapon and missile made use for to crack building and mountains and heavy stone. On the opposite it became enemy of human lives.
Some of the poorer countries still using traditional skills to survive old routes, carrying heavy loads by camel or horse.
In the nut shell I still believe that traditional skill has worth in our current life as well as technology is also become essential for our life to perform different task and as well as solved problems.
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