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You have a full time job and also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, -describe the situation-explain why you cannot continue at this time-say what action you w


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You have a full time job and also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, -describe the situation -explain why you cannot continue at this time -say what action you would like to take

Dear Mr John,

I am a current part-time student in your Introduction to Accounting evening class at Chisholm Institute. I am simultaneously working as a full-time teller at Sons Bank Ltd which explains why I have enrolled in an evening course.

Unfortunately, as from the start of November, I will no longer be able to attend any of your lessons during the week as I have recently been promoted as an assistant manager. With the added responsibilities attached to the new position, I will be leaving work at 5.30pm instead of 4pm. As a result, I will be missing half of each class if I wish to continue the course.

Nevertheless, I believe that the accounting lessons will be ben ...

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