Your friend got a new job. Write a letter to him/her and say
- Why haven’t you contacted him/her recently?
- Ask him/her some details about the new job.
- Suggest when and where you would like to meet him/her.
Dear Jane,
I hope this letter find you well. I am so sorry that I have never writing to you in ages. As I told you before I thought I had an exam on first of June, but I was wrong and my exam was two week earlier.
I was so happy when I heard you find your dream job, congratulation. I am very curious about your new job please share every detail. First, you work as a programmer or as team leader. Secondly, are you happy with your salary? If your new job place is near your home or not. How many coworker you have right know.
Dear, I am going to come your city because of my job between 10th of Aug until 20th Aug. I think this time will be great opportunity for us to see each other. I can come and visit you at your place on weekend and we can have a long chat and share all news.
Please do not be hesitate and call me via my cell phone whether you available at this time or not. I count all days to see you.
With love,
Mari.
Sentence: I am so sorry that I have never writing to you in ages.
Description: The fragment have never writing is rare
whether you available at this time or not.
whether you are available at this time or not.
will be great opportunity
will be a great opportunity
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 188 200
No. of Characters: 695 1000
No. of Different Words: 117 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.703 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.697 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.915 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 22 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 15 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 7 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 4 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.462 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.987 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.435 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.618 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.31 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4