AGE DISCRIMINATION OCCOURS WHEN A DECISION IS MADE ON THE BASIS OF A PERSON’S AGE. IN THE WORKPLACE, THESE ARE MOST OFTEN DECISIONS ABOUT BEING EMPLOYED IN THE FIRST PLACE, WINNING PROMOTIONS OR BEING UNFAIRLY DISMISSED. SHOULD DISCRIMINATION AGAINST OLDER WORKERS BE MADE ILLEGAL?
Age discrimination is an act of bias towards a person based on the individuals age. This act can be of employment opportunities, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Untill recently, till about 4 decades ago, not a single country had any laws to protect a persons interest or rights based on age. But in current times almost all countries have laws to make sure no person is unfairly treated.
As in personal lives where elders are seen the back bone of a family and act as guide to the children and the young once at home, similarly the same stands true for any organisation. The older people bring in experience and resilience to an organisation. The older people bring in the stability that is important for an organisation to grow fast and steadly. With their experience the older, more experienced people act as pillars of experience and mentors to the young who are filled with euphoria and the zest to achieve the milestones and move ahead fast in life.
On the other hand, with the rapidly growing and fast moving world that we live in today, we need the youth, energy and enthusiasm of the young. The younger generation comes with the hunger to grow fast and are overflowing with newer ideas and tricks. But what they lack is the know-how and the right guidance. It is here that the valuable experience of older employess can help them chart the way to achieve what the youngs desire.
To conclude I feel that while the cohenrence between the old and young, between the stable and dynamics is need for each organisation to grow, it is important to make discrimination based on age or anything else non-tolerable and illegal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ideas and tricks. But what they lack is the know how and the right guidance. It is here ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'i feel', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221153846154 0.268076937826 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.150641025641 0.116061578633 130% => OK
Adjectives: 0.099358974359 0.0759168565197 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0576923076923 0.0366838410393 157% => OK
Pronouns: 0.025641025641 0.0131127313244 196% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112179487179 0.155750635184 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0384615384615 0.0379272487307 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68064496885 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0384615384615 0.0210936926555 182% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.125 0.0948980150116 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00641025641026 0.00437022459523 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0192307692308 0.00967000014798 199% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1650.0 1161.00487805 142% => OK
No of words: 289.0 196.9 147% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70934256055 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.73763899035 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294117647059 0.337110787985 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214532871972 0.247514529752 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152249134948 0.171178102325 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107266435986 0.112407865282 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68064496885 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 106.607317073 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56401384083 0.546246751206 103% => OK
Word variations: 58.855000168 49.3433353143 119% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 8.93414634146 146% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2307692308 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9680147419 42.9750493124 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.923076923 135.714022679 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.692307692308 0.689975730869 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 43.684056428 47.7609492067 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.58904109589 2.94281807926 54% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343237699801 0.418131533498 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.181837995197 0.181151798455 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.139259598456 0.0850326197045 164% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.64151258479 0.706616315825 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159487803347 0.157042692854 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164921280757 0.228904883108 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559174508967 0.108899403657 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.380981994498 0.367819155151 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.189284177435 0.0812612215331 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240311771359 0.316326947829 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496465297997 0.0921553760075 54% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70731707317 243% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 3.16585365854 253% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 7.1512195122 154% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.5 Out of 9