the average of television sales throughout years from 1996 to 1999.
The graph provides information the average annually television sales throughout years from 1996 to 1999.
There was a great amount sales of television around six million units are sold in 1996 and rose higher than before in 1997 with 8 million televisions were bought by customers then the sales increased with eleven million are sold out to the peak in 1998 until the sales decrease slowly in 1999.
Recorded advance selling from six million took be eleven million properly in 1996 between 1998. Before this, the graph showed a number of sales that had increment namely 2 million from 1996 up to 1997. After that, three rising went up rapidly and made biggest improvement in the worldwide along year in 1998. Then just diminish one line of sales with ten million units in 1999.
The graph wrote and pointed the highest television sales in 1998 and the lowest reduction in 1996. It was be able change each year.
The graph provides information the average annually television sales
The graph provides the information about the average television sales annually
There was a great amount sales of television around six million units are sold in 1996
There was a great amount sales of television around six million units which are sold in 1996
and rose higher than before in 1997 with 8 million televisions were bought by customers then the sales increased with eleven million are sold out to the peak in 1998 until the sales decrease slowly in 1999.
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Sentence: There was a great amount sales of television around six million units are sold in 1996 and rose higher than before in 1997 with 8 million televisions were bought by customers then the sales increased with eleven million are sold out to the peak in 1998 until the sales decrease slowly in 1999.
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Recorded advance selling from six million took be eleven million properly in 1996 between 1998
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