The bar chart below shows the reasons for internet usage among British adults(2001)
This bar chart illustrates the proportions of males and females in United Kingdom who use internet for six reasons in the year 2001.
To begin with, email seem to be the main reason why most people use the Internet, which the number of man and woman users is almost 100. Cyber banking has the number of social traveller for men and women equally, at 42%. Like usage statistic for vending, at 20%. In addition, there are more usage women than men in two sectors, including product consumption and personal medical, with a man to woman ratio of 38% to 61% and 38% to 18% respectively. On the contrary, the female figure is more than male figure, which are 38% to 18% respectively.
In conclusion, there seems to be cyber communication is more common among females and males in United Kingdom. The proportion of usage numbers for banking transaction and vending for both sex is equal at 42% and 20%.
email seem to be the main reason
email seems to be the main reason
Sentence: Like usage statistic for vending, at 20.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to usage and statistic
there are more usage women than men in two sectors
there are more usage for women than for men in two sectors
there seems to be cyber communication is more common
Description: two verbs in one sentence. can you re-write this sentence?
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Score: 4.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 159 200
No. of Characters: 708 1000
No. of Different Words: 94 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.551 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.453 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.502 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 43 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.373 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.402 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.602 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4