The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.
The bar chart illustrates the number of global sales of games software, CDs and DVD from 2000 to 2003, a 3-year period quantified in $billion. Overall, the CDs is the highest sales with a decrease trend every period. While the games software tend to increase slightly, the dvd/video is likely to accumulate every year with unsignificant point.
To begin, the number of CDs sold out was a slight fluctuation from 2000 to 2003 and reached at 32 $bn in 2000. Following in that year, a 3-year after, it was a gradual fall to 30 $bn. In any case, the DVD positioned in the second level after CDs. It started from 19 $bn in 2000, and increased to 30 $bn in the follow year. The reverse of that condition, the games software was the lowest sales which sold out 12 $bn in 2000, and acrrued to 19 $bn in 2003.
In 2000 to 2001, the games software and DVD/Video were a gradual rise, 10 to 15 $bn for the games software and 19$bn to 21 $bn for dvd/video respectively. While a 2-year period eafter, both games software and dvd/video continued to increase slightly, the games software accrued approximatelly 2$bn and dvd/video was a gradual jump around 4$bn. In contrast with that trend, the CDs tended to decrease gradually, with the avarage of fall in 2 point every years.
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'in contrast', 'in any case']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231707317073 0.268076937826 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.105691056911 0.116061578633 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0609756097561 0.0759168565197 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0243902439024 0.0366838410393 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00813008130081 0.0131127313244 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126016260163 0.155750635184 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0162601626016 0.0379272487307 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.61375889041 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0528455284553 0.0210936926555 251% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00813008130081 0.00175180941692 464% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.138211382114 0.0948980150116 146% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00406504065041 0.00967000014798 42% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1232.0 1161.00487805 106% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.9 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6 5.90752243213 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73763899035 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.295454545455 0.337110787985 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204545454545 0.247514529752 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15 0.171178102325 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0954545454545 0.112407865282 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61375889041 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481818181818 0.546246751206 88% => OK
Word variations: 42.4804599429 49.3433353143 86% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0094962315 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.379541976 42.9750493124 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 135.714022679 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.0094962315 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.689975730869 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.48048780488 1283% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.4545454545 47.7609492067 85% => OK
Elegance: 2.70588235294 2.94281807926 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347127947385 0.418131533498 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.194953911336 0.181151798455 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.11325469651 0.0850326197045 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.642034691093 0.706616315825 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119601227373 0.157042692854 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182611872292 0.228904883108 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112758825232 0.108899403657 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.473415269712 0.367819155151 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00946002677163 0.0812612215331 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299516219959 0.316326947829 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876193928722 0.0921553760075 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations to cover all aspects.