The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the tears 1990 and 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart presents data on the rate of British people spending money on the charity works according to different age groups in the period from 1990 to 2010. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, the people who are 36 years old and above are spending more on the charity as compared to the younger age group, in the whole time frame.
In detail, in 1990 the people who are range from 18 to 25 are 17%,this were nearly doubled for age group 26 to 35 in the same year. The percentage reached the maximum in the age category range from 36 to 50 it was 42%. Then, this amount dropped gradually to end at 32% for people age 65 years and more.
In 2010 the number of people who gave money to the charity were increased substantially as people get older in age. The smallest portion were came from younger people who were 18 to 25 years old by about 7%. that share were tripled in age group 26 to 35. Then the number were gradually went up in next age category to peaked at just under 40% in age range from 51 to 65 years old, before it were finished at 35% for people who were 65 years and older.
this were nearly doubled
this was nearly doubled
The smallest portion were came from younger people
The smallest portion were from younger people
that share were tripled
that shares were tripled
to peaked at just under 40%
to peak at just under 40%
before it were finished
before it was finished
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 214 200
No. of Characters: 857 1000
No. of Different Words: 101 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.825 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.005 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.029 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 46 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 29 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 15 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.774 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.511 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.696 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.188 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4