The chart below show the information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US.
The line graphs illustrate figure data for honey-bee colonies and changing the amount of honey production, between 1970 and 2010 in the United State.
Generally, population of honey-bee decreased gradually, after inclined in 1980 and forecasts of honey bee fell steadily after got the greatest number in 1970.
In 1970, population of honey-bee were about 4 millions, then reached the peak in 1980 at about 4.2 millions. Finally, those declined stable from 1990 to 2010 at 3,5 millions and at about 1,7 millions respectively .
Production of honey got the top in 1970 at 130,000 tons then fell sharply at 110,000 tons in 1980, but recovered at almost 120,000 tons in 1990 and fell back dramatically towards until the end of product in 2010 at 70,000 tons.
Uniquely, in 1980, the overall number of honey-bee groups rose extremely, by contrast in the same period, honey production dropped significantly.
In conclusion, general trend of honey-bee populace and honey quantity in America were downwards from 1970 to 2010.
Sentence: Generally, population of honey-bee decreased gradually, after inclined in 1980 and forecasts of honey bee fell steadily after got the greatest number in 1970.
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Sentence: In 1970, population of honey-bee were about 4 millions, then reached the peak in 1980 at about 4.2 millions.
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Sentence: Finally, those declined stable from 1990 to 2010 at 3,5 millions and at about 1,7 millions respectively .
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Sentence: In conclusion, general trend of honey-bee populace and honey quantity in America were downwards from 1970 to 2010.
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