The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following two bar charts provide an overview in percentage regarding the average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with 1989.
Overall, it is clear that three big continents, such as America, Europe and Asia. In average, only around -5% until 5% of the house prices was change.
According to the first chart given, between 1990-1995 the Tokyo and London house prices was at around -7%. These were the lowest proportion of usage. Frankfurt was the highest of house prices changed. The calculation was one percent higher than Madrid which was 2%.
Regarding the house prices between 1996-2002, it is to remark the fact that house is important thing to have for human life. In contrast, house prices was the only rose dramatically in Tokyo than others countries. The percentage of house prices in New York was change in 100% because in 1990-1995 was -5% and in 1996-2002 was 5%.
Therefore, it is clear that no correlation between percentage for house prices in 1990 and 2002 with house prices in 1989 at five different cities.
it is clear that three big continents, such as America, Europe and Asia.
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house prices only rose dramatically in Tokyo
Sentence: In average, only around -5 until 5 of the house prices was change.
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Sentence: These were the lowest proportion of usage.
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Sentence: In contrast, house prices was the only rose dramatically in Tokyo than others countries.
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Score: 4.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 180 200
No. of Characters: 851 1000
No. of Different Words: 94 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.663 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.728 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.456 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.343 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.414 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.662 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.062 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4