The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparisons where relevant.
The charts give information about marriage and divorce rates in USA between 1970 and 2000 and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.
The first chart shows the number of marriages and divorces in the USA. The total of marriages people has larger number than the number of divorces people in each year (1970 – 2000). 2,5 Millions people married in 1970 and it is unsignificantly decreased in 2000 (2 Millions people).
The second chart shows the percentage of adult marital status in USA. 70% of adult Americans are married in 1970 and it is decreased in 2000 (59%). The percentage of adult who never married reaches 15% in 1970 and it is increased in 2000 (20%). While the rest (widowed and divorced) are about 5-8 % in these years.
Overall, married people are decreasing in the year of 2000 and the number of never married people is increasing in 2000. So, most of adult Americans prefer not to have marry in 2000 based on the data showed.
it is unsignificantly decreased in 2000 2 Millions people.
it is unsignificantly decreased in 2000 with 2 Millions people.
While the rest widowed and divorced are about 5-8 in these years.
While the rest is widowed and divorced which are about 5-8% in these years.
Sentence: So, most of adult Americans prefer not to have marry in 2000 based on the data showed.
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and marry
Sentence: 2,5 Millions people married in 1970 and it is unsignificantly decreased in 2000 2 Millions people.
Error: unsignificantly Suggestion: No alternate word
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