The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given pie charts describe some information about the ages of population in years of 2000 and 2050 in Yemen and Italy.

Obviously, the majority of people of Yemen were under 14 years in 2000. In that time, about 3.6 percent belong to the group of people who are over 60 years. However, predictions show some variations in all three categories in 2050. In contrast to situation in 2000, people in ages from 15 to 59 years would be increased. Moreover, there would be an increasing of 2.1 percent in elderly group.

Certainly, Italy has a different pattern of changes. In 2000, most of the Italian were in ages between 15 to 59. In this year, the number of people over the 60 years was greater than population under 15 years. After passing 50 years, the number of aged group and people between 15 and 59 years would be approximately merged.

To sum up with all, each of the aforementioned countries have their particular types of portion in ages of population. In contrast to Yemen, Italy would have more significant changes, specially in population of over 15 in the near future.

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people in ages from 15 to 59 years would be increased.
the number of people in ages from 15 to 59 years would increase.

specially in population of over 15 in the near future.
specially in the population of over 15 in the near future.

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