The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts compare information about people’s ages of Yemen and Italy in 2002 and the expected calclulations for 2050. In 2002, in Yemen, ages from 0 to 14 rose to 50.1%, half of the total ages altogether. While ages from15 to59 reregistered 46.3%, those over 60 dramatically plumed to3.6% .In2050, ages from 15 to 59 years will increase to 57.3%, double of ages from 0 to 14 years (0.37%), whereas ages over 60 will remain remarkably low compared to the other two age categories.
In Italy,in2002,ages from 15 to 59 went up to 61.6%,more than half of the total ages over 60 together with the ages from 0 to 14 (24.1% and 14.3% successively).in Italy, in 2050,ages over 60 will significantly double to 42.3,but ages from 15 to 59 will slightly fall down to 46.2% in contrast. Meanwhile, ages from 0 to 14 will keep declining (11.5%).
In conclusion, throughout the year 2002,ages from 0 to 14 was the highest age rank in Yemen, but, ages from 15-59 years was the prominent in Italy; however, in 2050, ages from 15 to 59 will remain outstanding in both countries.
15-59 years was the prominent in Italy;
15-59 years was prominent in Italy;
Sentence: The charts compare information about people's ages of Yemen and Italy in 2002 and the expected calclulations for 2050.
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Sentence: While ages from15 to59 reregistered 46.3, those over 60 dramatically plumed to3.6 .In2050, ages from 15 to 59 years will increase to 57.3, double of ages from 0 to 14 years 0.37, whereas ages over 60 will remain remarkably low compared to the other two age categories.
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