The charts below give information of the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below give information of the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given pie charts illustrated the populations into three categories of Yemen and Italy in two different years 2000 and predicted 2050. The categories are the age group between 0-14, 15-59 and more than 60 years.

To begin with, it is vivid that the population of Yemen consist of almost 50% children in the year of 2000 whereas the individuals between the ages of 15 to 59 were 46.3% in the same year. In 2050, the growth of individuals under the second category will be enhanced by 11% in contrast to 2000. In Yemen, demographics for children will be plunged by approximately 13% in 2050. People of Yemen whose age are more than 60 will be boomed and reached at 5.7% in the expected year although it was meagre around 3.6% in 2000.

Furthermore, young and middle aged people were more in population in Italy in 2000; it was 61.6% while it will be declined by approximately 15% in the expected year 2050. The individuals more than 60 years were mere 24.1% in 2000; however, it will be about doubled in 2050. Additionally, the demographics in Italy consisted of children will be slumped in 2050 as compared to 2000.

Laconically, it is demonstrated that mostly population will be consisted of individuals between 15 to 59 years in both nations in the predicted year 2050 rather than other age group.

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Sentence: People of Yemen whose age are more than 60 will be boomed and reached at 5.7 in the expected year although it was meagre around 3.6 in 2000.
Error: meagre Suggestion: meager

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