The diagram below show how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below show how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the production of leather goods from animal pelt. In general, the process undergoes a series of artificial steps.

First of all, animal hide is hanged on the line to catch the sun and wind for drying. Then it will be shipped to the factory by truck in order to start the process. In the factory, animal pelt is sunk in the tank of water and climb, before to be washed and moved the different tank of lime. After being soaked in this tank, the hide will go through the machine to be flattened.

Following that step, it will be transferred to another tank of the liquid ca...

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and moved the different tank of lime
and moved to the different tank of lime

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