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The bar charts we are given illustrate the income of more and less educated women and men aged between 16 and 59 in a week. At first glance, we can see that males earn far more money than females.

Initially, when male graduates become older, the income increases gradually, with from nearly 340 to 720. By contrast, there is a slight fluctuation at female from both educational levels and male non-graduates. The women in both categories make the amount of money when they are 25-29, being of 420 and 330 respectively. By contrast of this, the quantity of money gained by more studied male reaches a peak, at 720 when their ages are between 50 and 59. On the other hand, the lowest earning could be clearly seen in 16-19 aged citizens in both sexes, at almost 220, because of the impossibility of graduating from up to 16-19 years secondary schools in those ages.

Finally, it could be considered from graphs that the more educational level means the more independence from economical aspect.

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