the graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart below provides information about the number of viewers between Music Choice and Pop Parade sites on the web.
Started about 40000 viewers in first day, Music Choice shows some fluctuation until eleventh day but in the first four day happens wildly variation. Surprisingly, the chart skyrocket sharply and going to grow gentle around 125000 viewers in the second last day of period, as the highest viewers. However, the chart falls suddenly in the last day of period.
On the other hand, Pop Parade has high viewer in the first day about 120000 but shows a downward trend until middle of term. Surprisingly, the chart is surging sharply on the eleventh day that starts from ninth day. Sadly, it dives rapidly after increase. However, started on thirteenth day, this chart rises significantly and gets the highest point about 170000 viewers on the last day of period.
Overall, Music Choice has better result than Pop Parade because as can be seen from the chart Music Choice peaks almost 70 percent while Pop Parade only grows 40 percent during 15 days.
Music Choice shows some fluctuation until eleventh day but in the first four day happens wildly variation.
Music Choice shows some fluctuations until the eleventh day, but in the first four days wild variation happens.
the chart skyrocket sharply and going to grow gentle
the chart skyrockets sharply and is going to grow gently
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 180 200
No. of Characters: 861 1000
No. of Different Words: 102 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.663 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.783 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.176 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 14 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.659 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.484 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.699 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.123 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4