The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of the energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of the energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows about the U.S. energy consumption based on type of fuels from 1980 by using prediction to 2030.

Overall, the fuels divided into 6 type: Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural Gas – these are included into the old fuels, Nuclear, Solar/Wind, and Hydropower – these are included into the alternative fuels. Petrol and oil will become the most consumption of energy than any fuels, however, hydropower will be the lowest level in consumption energy in the USA.

In 1980, the alternative fuels were calculated approximately under 5 quadrillion units and then they were still increased gradually in 1985. But, after 1985, they separated one another, which only Nuclear will be predicted and preferred to remain steady from 2005 to 2025 and will increase slightly between 2025 and 2030 rather than others. On the other hand, the old fuels were various, for instance, Natural Gas will be projected as plateau between 2015 and 2030.

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based on type of fuels
based on the types of fuels

the fuels divided into 6 type
the fuels are divided into 6 types

Petrol and oil will become the most consumption of energy than any fuels,
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