The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The graphs show how much money people spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria from 1995 to 2005.

Unlike to other 3 countries, the trend in France was more steady that it shows a gradual increase off 20 millions approximately during a given period. People spent 10 millions more on books in 1999 in comparison to 1995 in Germany;however, this country experienced a slight amount of decreasing in 4 subsequent years before a remarkable improvement starting from 2003 and hit the highest point at nearly 95 millions dollars in 2005. After two-year growth, people decreased their s...

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in 2005 Austrians spent 10 millions more than Germans on books.
in 2005 Austrians spent 10 millions more than Italy on books.

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