The graph below shows the annual water usage (in millions of cubic meters) by industries in Some country.

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The graph below shows the annual water usage (in millions of cubic meters) by industries in Some country.

The bar chart shows the statistics of two different water sources used in seven different aspects annually.

An evident from a quick glance, mostly the ground water was used in all industries except in machinery where public supply water was used more in amount.

Looking at ground water supply chemical industries are leading by using 430 millions of cubic meters, where usage of metal is in second place (240 MCM). Followed to that, paper and food/ drinks are in next two levels by using 190 and 110 millions of cubic meters respectively. In addition, fuel consumed 70 and textiles were 80 MCM. The other form of water supply (public) were accomplished mostly by chemical 9240), secondly by food/drink 190, where only the place public supply over took the ground water. All other form of usages of public sources are approximately same expect only in metal (50 MCM).

To recapitulate, majority of the ground water sources are consumed annually by industries than the public supply.

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where usage of metal is in second place
where the usage of metal is in the second place

where only the place public supply over took the ground water.
only the place where public supply over took the ground water.

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