The graph gives us an information about the percentage of U.K. households with regards to their system of access in modern technology between the year 1996 to 2003.
Overall, CD player represents the highest number of percentage whereas the use of Internet was undoubtedly to be the least.
CD player rose at slower pace with nearly 60% on the year 1996 and has reached its peak by 2003 with about 85%. Home computers, being the second place (30%) on 1996-1997 showed a gradual increase and reached its peak to more than 50%from 2002 to 2003. In addition, mobile phones surged up by 1996 and remained steady in the middle from the year 1998 to 2001 but then rise once more by 2003 and ranked the second of roughly about 70%, noticeably beating the mobile phones. The internet access was introduced during1998 and skyrocketed its usage within 5 years, climbing up from 10% to nearly 50% by 2003.
To sum up, the use of modern technology saw a rising trend among the households in UK and expected that it will continue to escalate as time goes on.
between the year 1996 to 2003.
from the year 1996 to 2003.
CD player rose at slower pace
CD player rose at a slower pace
mobile phones surged up by 1996 and remained steady in the middle from the year 1998 to 2001 but then rise once more by 2003 and ranked the second of roughly about 70%
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