The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
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The line graph explains the average number of percentage of ageing people population in a range of 100 years located in Japan, Sweden, and the USA.
Generally speaking, all countries except Japan showed a gradual increase of the older society started from 1940 to the next eighty years. Those numbers are dramatically predicted to soar in the middle of 21st century.
First able, Japan was the only one country which its elderly population had fallen approximately 2% in the 40’s. The number continued to steadily remain its proportion for almost forty years. Meanwhile, the USA and Sweden had almost the same number of old civilization for about nearly 15% in 1980 which rose and maintained until the end of 90’s decade. At the end, there are many changes which will be predicted in the beginning of the 21st century as Japan rapidly boost its number to reach its peak to roughly 27% in 2040 leaving Sweden and the USA behind.
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