The member income in IMF World bank between 1990 and 2000 and global market share exports in nine different regions in 2000.
The line graph shows the total special trade zone member income in IMF World bank between 1990 and 2000. The pie chart illustrates global market share exports in nine different regions in 2000.
In 1990, the total member income in IMF World bank stood at just above 120,000 billion. From 1991 to 1993, this figure shows a level of fluctuation between 120,000 billion to 135,000 billion. In the middle of 1993, the total member income was 140,000 billion. By 1996, this figure has risen significantly to just below 160,000 billion before increasing to just below 180,000 billion in 1997. In 1999, although the total member income decreased slightly to about 174,000 billion, it increased gradually in the following year and reached to its peak, at approximately 175,000 billion.
Regarding pie chart, while Bensland and Jamesland showed a largest proportion of the global share market in 2000, at 90,233 and 89,522 respectively, Joland and Peterland shared a smallest proportion, between 11,000 to 12,500. In Andyland , the global share market was 75,351 in 2000, whereas Timsland , Hertbertland, Fredland and Darronland were in between 46000 to 56000 billions.
Overall, the special trade zone member income in IMF World bank increases considerably over the periods of ten years. Also, evidently the global share market in Bensland and Jamesland were largest compared to others region.
Sentence: Regarding pie chart, while Bensland and Jamesland showed a largest proportion of the global share market in 2000, at 90,233 and 89,522 respectively, Joland and Peterland shared a smallest proportion, between 11,000 to 12,500.
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compared to other regions.
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Don't need to go details one year by one year. just need to pick up the main features in the second paragraph.
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