Mobile phones Vs Landlines
The chart explains a survey which 100 person in each county like Canada, US, German, Denmark, UK, Sweden, and Italy to use phone mobiles and landlines.
The chart shows that Italy is the highest to use phone mobile with 90 per 100 people. Then, it is followed consecutive by Sweden with 88 per 100 people, UK with 86 per100 people, and German with 70 per 100 people.
In Canada and US, it is really contrast. There are many people use land lines. Such as, US have 68 per 100 people use land lines and Canada only have 35 per 100 people. Canada is a country with fewer people use phone mobiles. But, Canada has many people use landlines. It is about 65 per 100 people.
Interestingly, Denmark is a country the highest societies to use landlines than other countries.
Overall, Italy is a highest country to use phone mobiles where people who apply landlines are fewer than other countries.
100 person in each county like Canada, US, German, Denmark, UK, Sweden, and Italy to use phone mobiles and landlines.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence?
it is followed consecutive by Sweden
it is followed consecutively by Sweden
Sentence: Then, it is followed consecutive by Sweden with 88 per 100 people, UK with 86 per100 people, and German with 70 per 100 people.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to per 100 and people
Sentence: Overall, Italy is a highest country to use phone mobiles where people who apply landlines are fewer than other countries.
Description: The token a is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to a and highest
flaws:
Read a good grammar book. You have serious grammatical issues.
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Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 159 200
No. of Characters: 701 1000
No. of Different Words: 74 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.551 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.409 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.172 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 24 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 12 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.455 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.814 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.501 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.724 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.247 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4