the number of students in three courses from 2001-2004

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the number of students in three courses from 2001-2004

The bar chart illustrates data about the total of students who had been getting involved in three different courses for 4 years (2001-2004). It is measured in millions of students. Overall, it can be seen that the number of students increased in the end of the period at all courses.

The number of students who joined course A stood at about 4.3 million in the early period and decreased significantly to 2.5 million next year. However, it rose gradually until the last period and had gradual rebound. On the other hand, 2001-2004 witnessed a steady increase of the quantity of students in course C. The number of students in this course at the end of the period was about 2.5 times of the total of students at the beginning of the period.

Finally, a fluctuate of the number of students, around 2.5 million in 2001 and 2.8 million in 2004, was experienced in course B. It peaked at approximately 2.3 million in 2002 and was almost same as the number of students who joined course A in 2001.

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The bar chart illustrates data
The bar chart illustrates the data

and had gradual rebound
and had a gradual rebound

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