the table below describes victims by age group and offence category in Venezuela,1999.
The table compares the data of the number of people in various age groups who are the victims of 5 crimes in Venezuela in 1999. It can be obviously seen that robbery has taken the first place among others.
The highest number of victims aged in 8-14 is in the robbery at 4558. The second place is taken by the victims who are over 25 and under 44 years old in this category. In contrast, in age of over 65, the amount of vulnerable people declines. In comparison with robbery, the numbers are lower in negligence with 54 victims. There are not any victims aged in between 25 and 44 in this group. The highest number belongs to those people age of 8-14. The total numbers of victims in blackmail and kidnapping are close, at 223 and 233 respectively.
To sum up, the highest total number is in robbery whereas negligence makes it down.
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