the table below gives information about changes in models of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The tables shows the data about changes in type of transportation in England between 1985 and 2000. The models of travel are walking, bicycle, car, local and long distance bus, train, taxi, and the other. The biggest changing are long distance bus, local bus and taxi.
In 1985 person used taxi just 13 miles per person per year. It became smallest part. And the biggest transportation are used is car, it about 3,1999. It is more than 70 % from totally models 4,740. Long distance bus is the second lower type level just 54 miles per person.
In 2000 private transportation raised from 3.199 to 4.806. It still become the largest one. Taxi moved up from 13 miles to 42 miles, improved about 29 miles than before . in the other hand, long distance bus increased more 100 percents than 1985, from 54 miles to 124 miles every year. And totally of models of travel in 2000 amount 6.475 and it has 2000 miles more.
The sum up, data reports significant increasing in typical of travel in England among 1985 and 2000 that car, local bus, and long distance bus are have wide range.
It became smallest part
It became the smallest part
And the biggest transportation are used is car, it about 3,1999
And the biggest transportation which is used is car, it is about 3,1999
It still become the largest one.
It becomes the largest one.
Sentence: It is more than 70 from totally models 4,740.
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Sentence: The sum up, data reports significant increasing in typical of travel in England among 1985 and 2000 that car, local bus, and long distance bus are have wide range.
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