The table below gives information about changes in modes od travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
SUmmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table below represents data of alteration in travelling modes, which shown by average distance in miles per person in two distinct years.
To begin with, the first year occured in 1985, while the longest distance and the most significant change gained by car travelled for approximately 3000 miles in 1985 and raised up to around 4000 miles in 2000, while the number of bicycle and local bus route deteriorated from the previous year. Another increases happened to some vehicles for instances long distance bus, taxi, and others, however walking people reach negligible miles during those two years.
According to both years information, the vehicles gained increases in the number of distance, based on all modes data shown, the total number of miles travelled raised from around 4000 miles, which have similar range with 2000's route by car, stride up to above 6000 miles, ignore the insignificant decreases by certain vehicle.
To sum up, with taking all evidence into account, the influencing changes occured to car vehicle while others gave trifling rate prior to given time span.
The table below represents data of alteration in travelling modes
The table below represents the data of alteration in travelling modes
Sentence: , which shown by average distance in miles per person in two distinct years.
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Another increases happened
Another increase happened
while the longest distance and the most significant change gained by car travelled for approximately 3000 miles
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to given time span.
to the given time span.
Sentence: According to both years information,
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to years and information
Sentence: To sum up, with taking all evidence into account, the influencing changes occured to car vehicle while others gave trifling rate prior to given time span.
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