The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives information about How people do travel in England exactly in 1985 and 2000. In 1985, people live in England prefer travel by manual like walking, bicyle, and local bus. And in 2000, the society loves travel by fast transportation like car, long distance bus, train taxi and other.
In 1985 the manual ways are very famous for society. For example 1985, the table gives information that walking is very famous mode to travel in England than in 2000. The table shows that from 1985 to 2000 had decreasing changed by walker. The other instance, local is so famous than in 2000. The table shows about not many people prefer travel by local bus any more. The society changed their transportation by modern transportation which the vehicles are faster and more comfortable than local bus. We can look at the table that fast transportation is so famous mode in 2000. The table shows in 2000many people use the car for travel, in this case that show decreasing happened from 1985 to 2000.
In the modern age, many people love to do something fast and instant. It shows on the table that using by fast transportation like car and train are very comfortable and so helping for society. The changing era made many people changed their mind and used the fast transportation.
...that from 1985 to 2000 had decreasing changed by walker.
Description: what is the subject for this sentence?
Sentence: The other instance, local is so famous than in 2000.
Description: The fragment , local is is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace local with noun.
Sentence: In 1985, people live in England prefer travel by manual like walking, bicyle, and local bus.
Error: bicyle Suggestion: bicycle
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.929 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.826 7.5
The essay is not exactly right on the table.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 223 200
No. of Characters: 1030 1000
No. of Different Words: 90 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.864 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.619 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.472 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 60 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.929 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.826 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.428 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.556 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.145 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4