the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The table provides with information about consumer expenditure on three different items in five European countries, namely, Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and turkey in 2002.
Overall, all of five countries spent more money on food, drinks and tobacco than clothing & footwear and leisure & education. Particularly Turkish people were chosen by spending approximately 32 % of their incomes on the section of food and tobacco. The lowest result (16.36%) belonged to Italian people in this respect.
In Controversy Italian residents spent most money on clothing and footwear among five countries which comprised 9%. Spain (6.51%) and Ireland (6.43%) consumer expenditures were approximately equal in this field. Sweden people expended just 5.40% of their incomes on clothes and footwear and this was lower than other four countries.
However their expenditure (3.22%) on leisure and education was satisfactory in comparison with other countries. Just Turkey outstripped Sweden in this section by spending 4.35% of their revenues. In general spent money on leisure and education was lower than other two items.
spent more money on food, drinks and tobacco than clothing & footwear
spent more money on food, drinks and tobacco than on clothing & footwear
Particularly Turkish people were chosen by spending approximately 32 % of their incomes on the section of food and tobacco.
Particularly Turkish people spent approximately 32 % of their incomes on the section of food and tobacco.
However their expenditure (3.22%) on leisure and education was satisfactory in comparison with other countries.
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In general spent money on leisure and education was lower than other two items.
In general spending money on leisure and education was lower than that on other two items.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 166 200
No. of Characters: 900 1000
No. of Different Words: 91 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.589 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.422 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.658 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 68 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 55 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.005 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.2 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.415 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.653 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.046 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4