The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisolls where relevant.
This table shows how 5 countries of Europe consume three categories of different items in 2002.
By considering food, drinks, and tobacco, it would be clear that Turkey has the highest amount of consuming of 32.14 percent. At the same time, Swedish and Italian has the lowest percentages within the ranking.
On the other hand, we are witnessed with completely different pattern of consuming in second column, because Italy and Sweden has the highest and lowest values in group of clothing and footwear, respectively.
In base of the data of leisure and education consumption, Spanish people has the least tendency to consume this types of products. By contrast, Turkish people has the maximum values of buying and using of these stuffs.
The overview of this table illustrates that food, drinks and tobacco has the highest values of consumption in the all 5 countries. On the other hand, leisure and education have not the same popularity within the mentioned European countries.
Swedish and Italian has the lowest percentages
Swedish and Italian have the lowest percentages
because Italy and Sweden has the highest and lowest values
because Italy and Sweden have the highest and lowest values
Spanish people has the least tendency
Spanish people have the least tendency
Turkish people has the maximum values
Turkish people have the maximum values
Sentence: In base of the data of leisure and education consumption, Spanish people has the least tendency to consume this types of products.
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Sentence: The overview of this table illustrates that food, drinks and tobacco has the highest values of consumption in the all 5 countries.
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