The table gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. There are London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles.
The table gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. There are London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles.
London is the first and the oldest city builds underground railway system. It was opened in 1863 and having 775 millions of passengers per year. London is the greatest distance, on average 394 kilometers of route, while Kyoto is the fifth city uses underground railway system. It was opened in 1981 and having 45 millions of passengers per year. Kyoto is the shortest journey _ just 11 kilometers of route.
The second country opened underground railway system is Paris in 1900 and having 1191 millions of passengers per year. Paris is the second greatest distance, on average 199 kilometers of route, and then Tokyo followed in 1927 and having 1972 millions of passengers per year. Tokyo has the most passengers per year and the third country largest distance, on average 155 kilometers of route.
In 1976 and in 2001, Washington DC and Los Angeles also opened underground railway system with the distance average just 126 and 28 kilometers of route, and having passengers per year average 144 millions and 50 millions per year. Without Los Angeles is the newest of underground system, but Washington DC has average passengers larger and the distance was longer than Los Angeles per year.
Overall, London is the longest distance in six cities, but Tokyo has the most passengers per year, while Kyoto is the shortest journey and also having the lowest passengers per year.
London is the first and the oldest city builds underground railway system.
London is the first and the oldest city which builds underground railway system.
London is the greatest distance,
London has the greatest distance,
while Kyoto is the fifth city uses underground railway system.
while Kyoto is the fifth city which uses underground railway system.
Sentence: Tokyo has the most passengers per year and the third country largest distance, on average 155 kilometers of route.
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Sentence: Overall, London is the longest distance in six cities,
Sentence: Overall, London has the longest distance in six cities,
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