The table gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2012.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2012.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table explains the data of the average percentages of people consumption from five countries in Europe in 2012.

First of all, food, drinks, and tobacco were found as the biggest expense in all sites followed by clothing and footwear (2nd rank) and leisure and education (3rd rank). Turkey was described as the country which consumes the highest rate of food and tobacco roughly 32,14% and leisure and education (4,35%). On the other side, Italia, a country known as its fashion, was not surprisingly placed as a region which spent the highest percentage of fashion approximately 6,51%. In the contrary, Swedish spent the lowest amount of their allowance for food and clothing consumptions totally 8,62%.

To sum up, all of five countries showed that they consumed food, drinks, and tobacco as their biggest expenses. On the other side, leisure and education were defined as their lowest expenses at the same year.

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