the table shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.
The table gives information several coffee shop buildings which have sale on a typical weekday. The general view is that the number of sales in Pastries, which is 275 in 7:30-10:30, there has reduction as much as tree times in next eight hours.
To specify, in 7:30-10:30, the biggest sales is Pastries with 275, followed by Coffee is 265. In the same hours, Tea sales is 110, which double than Sandwiches (50). On the contrary, in the next four hours, Sandwiches peak at 200, that meant it has the highest sales of four offices building. To compare, tea decrease to fourfold, while Coffee and Pastries sales have big differences (185 versus 95).
However, when Pastries has a drop by 70, Sandwiches indicates the reverse to 110 between 2:30-5:-30 and 5:30-8:30
To sum up, in the midday of weekday, the amount of the sales are climbed by Coffee (from 145 to 200) and Tea (from 35 to 75) in a coffee shop.
The table gives information several coffee shop buildings which have sale on a typical weekday
The table gives information to several coffee shop buildings which have sales on a typical weekday
the number of sales in Pastries, which is 275 in 7:30-10:30, there has reduction as much as tree times in next eight hours.
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It is not for four office buildings, but for one coffee shop.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
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