Television sales (millions)
In this graph of Electro Inc’s television sales between 1996 and 1999, we can see that purchases of televisions went in 1996 and continued to rise steadily until 1998 when they dropped slightly in 1999.
This graph shows details information of television sales that there was around 6 millions purchasers in 1996, after that the numbers rises with 8 millions in 1997, and then there is a sharp increase in 1998 with less than 11 millions buyers of television sales, after this in the next year namely in 1999 there was around 10 millions purchasers in this year only a slight drop.
Between 1996 and 1997 numbers upsurge of television sales with 2 millions buyers, and then in the next year between 1997 and 1998 numbers raise of television sales with less than 3 millions purchasers, numbers decline between 1998 and 1999 with only 1 millions buyers.
Overall the graph shows that television sales is most salable and the number of buyers at the most in 1998.
that there was around 6 millions purchasers in 1996
that there were around 6 millions purchasers in 1996
Sentence: Between 1996 and 1997 numbers upsurge of television sales with 2 millions buyers, and then in the next year between 1997 and 1998 numbers raise of television sales with less than 3 millions purchasers, numbers decline between 1998 and 1999 with only 1 millions buyers.
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Suggestion: Refer to numbers and upsurge
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to millions and buyers
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to millions and purchasers
Overall the graph shows that television sales is most
Overall the graph shows that television sales are most
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