The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two maps given us illustrate an island’s design before and after the creation of several tourist facilities. Overall, it is clearly seen that an island became much more convenient and attractive for tourists after the construction of some buildings there.
Firstly, from the first map we can see an island which covered by some palms rarely and surrounded by sea. In the west part of an island is beach .
Furthermore, on the island some buildings were built and infrastructure was improved which makes the island much more comfortable for accepting tourists. So, there is pier and two ships near it. After pier there is reception building which circulated by vehicle track. This vehicle track directs to the restaurant. Then, we can notice two accommodation area which makes easy to live for tourists without any tents or difficulties. Whole island covered by footpath which prevents some hardships for going on foot and reaching to the beach easily.
The two maps given us illustrate an island’s design
The two maps given illustrate an island’s design
see an island which covered by some palms
see an island which is covered by some palms
So, there is pier and two ships near it.
Description: 'it' refers to what?
there is reception building which circulated by vehicle track.
there is a reception building which is circulated by a vehicle track.
Whole island covered by footpath
Whole island is covered by footpath
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